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Nancy19820 Posted 20 years ago
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In effort to help the City’s businesses, we are holding a reception for the local businesses. The speakers will provide resources/tips needed to expand, and grow their businesses. We will have speakers from the Dept. of Economic Development and Community Affairs. They will talk about some of the programs they offer to the local businesses. We expect a minimum of 30 local businesses will be attending.
Would you kindly talk about the SCORE? Because most our local businesses are struggling to stay in business, would you provide them tips on how to expand their customers base, problem areas to look for, marketing (such as advertise display), and what the SCORE can help.
In effort to help the City’s businesses, we are holding a reception for the local businesses. The speakers will provide resources/tips needed to expand, and grow their businesses. We will have speakers from the Dept. of Economic Development and Community Affairs. They will talk about some of the programs they offer to the local businesses. We expect a minimum of 30 local businesses will be attending.
Would you kindly talk about the SCORE? Because most our local businesses are struggling to stay in business, would you provide them tips on how to expand their customers base, problem areas to look for, marketing (such as advertise display), and what the SCORE can help.
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In an effort to help the City’s businesses, we are holding a reception for the local businesses. The speakers will provide resources/tips needed to expand ,( delete comma) and grow their businesses. We will have speakers from the Dept.
- In an effort to help the City’s businesses, we are holding a reception for the local businesses.
- The speakers will provide resources/tips needed to expand ,( delete comma) and grow their businesses.
- We will have speakers from the Dept.
- of Economic Development and Community Affairs.
- They will talk about some of the programs they offer to the local businesses.
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In an effort to help the City’s businesses, we are holding a reception for the local businesses. The speakers will provide resources/tips needed to expand,(delete comma) and grow their businesses. We will have speakers from the Dept. of Economic Development and Community Affairs. They will talk about some of the programs they offer t
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