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Nancy19820 Posted 20 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct grammar for me & help me say in a better way?
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database is one word. Otherwise your first paragraph looks great. I don't know what "retail potential" is.
- database is one word.
- Otherwise your first paragraph looks great.
- I don't know what "retail potential" is.
- "If you're okay with the changes" is better, but it's informal.
- If this isn't someone you work with closely, say "If you find these changes acceptable, I can send [what?
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database is one word. Otherwise your first paragraph looks great.
I don't know what "retail potential" is. "If you're okay with the changes" is better, but it's informal. If this isn't someone you work with closely, say "If you find these changes acceptable, I can send [what? the packet? the booklet? what are you sending?] to FE. (Will the person reading this know what FE is?)
I don't know what "retail potential" is. "If you're okay with the changes" is better, but it's informal. If this isn't someone you work with closely, say "If you find these changes acceptable, I can send [what? the packet? the booklet? what are you sending?] to FE. (Will the person reading this know what FE is?)
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