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Gillyflower Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Would you check this sentence please?

Hi,

Could you check the following sentence please?

"Training workers to use hearing protection devices is essential; as X et al. demonstrated in their study that educational activities were effective for workers exposed to occupational noise."

Thanks!

  

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The connection of those two thoughts is wrong with "as". gillyflower "Training workers to use hearing protection devices is essential . X et al.

— CalifJim

  • The connection of those two thoughts is wrong with "as".
  • gillyflower "Training workers to use hearing protection devices is essential .
  • X et al.
  • " Just make it two separate sentences.
  • CJ
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The connection of those two thoughts is wrong with "as".

gillyflower"Training workers to use hearing protection devices is essential. X et al. demonstrated in their study that educational activities were effective for workers exposed to occupational noise."

Just make it two separate sentences.

CJ

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