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Gillyflower Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Would you check this sentence please?

Hi,

Would you check my sentence below?

"It is obvious that this type of learning [flipped learning] influenced by such factors as exploratory learning strategies, independent and profound learning will lead to the understanding and using of the concepts of the course with proper time management.


Thanks!

  

Top answer

Omit the first four words of the sentence, "It is obvious that". Put a comma between "[flipped learning]" and "influenced". Put a comma between "learning" and "will".

  • Omit the first four words of the sentence, "It is obvious that".
  • Put a comma between "[flipped learning]" and "influenced".
  • Put a comma between "learning" and "will".
  • Put "use" in place of "using" in "using of the concepts".
  • Put a comma between "course" and "with".
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Omit the first four words of the sentence, "It is obvious that". Put a comma between "[flipped learning]" and "influenced". Put a comma between "learning" and "will". Put "use" in place of "using" in "using of the concepts". Put a comma between "course" and "with".

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