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Therefore there is an assumption that lighting is a physical factor causing oxidative stress in male rats, which disturbs the balance between the production and the destruction of ROS and leads to a decrease in antioxidant capacity and an increase in lipid peroxidation under high light intensities.
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It's easier to understand if you use two sentences, eg Therefore there is an assumption that lighting is a physical factor causing oxidative stress in male rats, This stress disturbs the balance between the production and the destruction of ROS, and leads to a decrease in antioxidant capacity and an increase in lipid peroxidation under high light intensities. there is an assumption is a weak and weaselly phrase. Who makes this assumption?
- It's easier to understand if you use two sentences, eg Therefore there is an assumption that lighting is a physical factor causing oxidative stress in male rats, This stress disturbs the balance between the production and the destruction of ROS, and leads to a decrease in antioxidant capacity and an increase in lipid peroxidation under high light intensities.
- there is an assumption is a weak and weaselly phrase.
- Who makes this assumption?
- Say eg We assume .
- .
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It's easier to understand if you use two sentences,
eg Therefore there is an assumption that lighting is a physical factor causing oxidative stress in male rats, This stress disturbs the balance between the production and the destruction of ROS, and leads to a decrease in antioxidant capacity and an increase in lipid peroxidation under high light intensities.
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