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Ahn Posted 19 years ago
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Would you check this long sentence?

Economic experts expect that unless structural and customary problem, which is so far regarded as chief obstacle to Inter-Korean economic cooperation, isn’t largely overcome , it is possible not only that the effectiveness of this agreement is reduced, but also that dispute over ‘unconditional support to North Korea’, which has been frequently controversial, is repeated.





  

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Hi, Economic experts expect that unless structural and customary problem, which is so far regarded as chief obstacle to Inter-Korean economic cooperation, isn’t largely overcome , it is possible not only that the effectiveness of this agreement is reduced, but also that dispute over ‘unconditional support to North Korea’, which has been frequently controversial, is repeated. -> I think this sentence is too long and too complex, so I want to know if this is grammatically correct and understandable. I'll appreciate any correction.

  • Hi, Economic experts expect that unless structural and customary problem, which is so far regarded as chief obstacle to Inter-Korean economic cooperation, isn’t largely overcome , it is possible not only that the effectiveness of this agreement is reduced, but also that dispute over ‘unconditional support to North Korea’, which has been frequently controversial, is repeated.
  • -> I think this sentence is too long and too complex, so I want to know if this is grammatically correct and understandable.
  • I'll appreciate any correction.
  • There are some grammar problems here and, as you suspect, the sentence is too long and hard to understand.
  • I suggest this.
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Hi,

Economic experts expect that unless structural and customary problem, which is so far regarded as chief obstacle to Inter-Korean economic cooperation, isn’t largely overcome , it is possible not only that the effectiveness of this agreement is reduced, but also that dispute over ‘unconditional support to North Korea’, which has been frequently controversial, i
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Thank you so much, Clive

It was great help.Emotion: big smile
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Anon, it's better to start a new thread than to continue on an old one with a new question.


- i have return back the photoes.
I have returned the photos.

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