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Pb03 Posted 19 years ago
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Would you check these three sentences ??

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00The following sentences are about an online game.02br
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00I'm wondering there is anybody who would check them in terms of grammar and usages.02br
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00Thanks a lot!02br
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00This game shows an everlasting history of Eastern martial artists transcending time and space.02br
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00As a conventional online RPG, it is full of oriental colors and a new history of Eastern martial arts begins in 1000 years!02br
00We started hosting this game commercially in Japan in April 2000 and have been serving customers in 010200 since April 2001 as well. 00 0-
  

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0The intent of your sentences is somewhat obscured, but I offer some possible revisions:02br
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01i00This game 01b00displays02b00 01b00the long02b00 history of Eastern martial artists01b00,02b00 transcending time and space.02i02br
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01i00As a conventional online
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