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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Would you check the correctness of the titles?

Hi there~

I am wondering whether the titles below are correct both grammatically and in meaning.
Would you take a look at and check them?
Your comments will be much appreciated.
Thanks~ !

pb

The tiltles are :

A Study of the United Operation of the Bibliotherapy Program with the Cooperation of Public Libraries and Communities
--- Focused on the Case of Public Libraries of the Seoul Metropolitan Office of Education
  

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At first glance, it looks grammatically correct. However, without knowing exactly what the study is about, I cannot say that it is clearly stated. I think you want to talk about the cooperation of two organizations, but that is not quite what you say.

— Doctor D

  • At first glance, it looks grammatically correct.
  • However, without knowing exactly what the study is about, I cannot say that it is clearly stated.
  • I think you want to talk about the cooperation of two organizations, but that is not quite what you say.
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At first glance, it looks grammatically correct. However, without knowing exactly what the study is about, I cannot say that it is clearly stated. I think you want to talk about the cooperation of two organizations, but that is not quite what you say. So, perhaps a small change:

A Study of the United Operation of the Bibliotherapy Program in Cooperation with Public
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