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Persian Learner Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Would you check my writing please?
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Hi my darling,Jenny.
Today was a fantastic day for me. After waking up,I brushed my teeth and had fried eggs for breakfast, and spent two hours on my homework.
I went to the theater at 11 o'clock and was there until noon. On the way back home I had to wait an hour at the bus station.
The bus arrived at the station really late so I read a classic novel meanwhile. In the end I arrived home at 2 p.m. Next, I took a shower and shaved my legs.
Finally, I rested on the sofa and read a science fiction novel.
Jenny,tomorrow I want to go to a movie theater to watch a great western; Would you like to come with me? I know that you don't like this kind of show,
but I promise that we will have an enjoyable time.However, if you like, we can watch an action or horror movie too.I remember that the last time we watched an epic movie together.It was full of exciting events from the aincient time.
I prefer to learn about things in the past than happenings in the future.
Sweetie, as you know, the university holidays start soon. I have a lot of comedies to watch together. You might say that it is such a dumb idea, but you will change your mind and be glad later. I also have some funny cartoons for your lovely niece.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
See you later.
Sara.
Hi my darling,Jenny.
Today was a fantastic day for me. After waking up,I brushed my teeth and had fried eggs for breakfast, and spent two hours on my homework.
I went to the theater at 11 o'clock and was there until noon. On the way back home I had to wait an hour at the bus station.
The bus arrived at the station really late so I read a classic novel meanwhile. In the end I arrived home at 2 p.m. Next, I took a shower and shaved my legs.
Finally, I rested on the sofa and read a science fiction novel.
Jenny,tomorrow I want to go to a movie theater to watch a great western; Would you like to come with me? I know that you don't like this kind of show,
but I promise that we will have an enjoyable time.However, if you like, we can watch an action or horror movie too.I remember that the last time we watched an epic movie together.It was full of exciting events from the aincient time.
I prefer to learn about things in the past than happenings in the future.
Sweetie, as you know, the university holidays start soon. I have a lot of comedies to watch together. You might say that it is such a dumb idea, but you will change your mind and be glad later. I also have some funny cartoons for your lovely niece.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
See you later.
Sara.
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Hi my darling, Jenny. Today was a fantastic day for me. After waking up, I brushed my teeth and had fried eggs for breakfast, and spent two hours on my homework.
- Hi my darling, Jenny.
- Today was a fantastic day for me.
- After waking up, I brushed my teeth and had fried eggs for breakfast, and spent two hours on my homework.
- I went to the theater at 11 o'clock and was there until noon.
- The bus arrived at the station really late so I read a classic novel meanwhile.
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Hi my darling, Jenny.
Today was a fantastic day for me. After waking up, I brushed my teeth and had fried eggs for breakfast, and spent two hours on my homework. I went to the theater at 11 o'clock and was there until noon. On the way back home I had to wait an hour at the bus station.The bus arrived at the station really late so I read a classic novel meanwhile. In the end I arrived home
Today was a fantastic day for me. After waking up, I brushed my teeth and had fried eggs for breakfast, and spent two hours on my homework. I went to the theater at 11 o'clock and was there until noon. On the way back home I had to wait an hour at the bus station.The bus arrived at the station really late so I read a classic novel meanwhile. In the end I arrived home
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As a matter of fact, I'm writing a series of letters just to help my little sister better memorize words and learn how to use them in context. I write one letter that consists of the new words per each unit of her book. I want to make sure they are grammatically correct. Thanks.
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That's not what I meant. 
I asked because you were using "darling" and "sweetie" in your letter. In any case, I'll assume the le
I asked because you were using "darling" and "sweetie" in your letter. In any case, I'll assume the le
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