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Would you check my summary please, thank you.

1. A policeman’s investigation in a murder tracks down an influential politician as a prime suspect. As he tries to serve justice, he has to bear the responsibility of bringing down a giant.

2. Sethu is a policeman assigned to investigate the murder case of a fellow policeman, just to discover that the prime suspect is an influential politician backed with vengeance. As Sethu forces him to redeem himself in justice, the irate politician has a different plan for the honest policeman, and his family.
  

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A summary should cover the full scope of the reading. It should tell about the beginning, the middle, and end of the selection. Your paragraphs don't seem to do that.

  • A summary should cover the full scope of the reading.
  • It should tell about the beginning, the middle, and end of the selection.
  • Your paragraphs don't seem to do that.
  • Unless I see the article, I can't be sure, but it looks like these are not complete enough to be summaries.
  • 2.
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A summary should cover the full scope of the reading. It should tell about the beginning, the middle, and end of the selection. Your paragraphs don't seem to do that. Unless I see the article, I can't be sure, but it looks like these are not complete enough to be summaries.


2. Sethu is a policeman assigned to investigate the murder case of a fellow policeman, only to discover that th
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Hi, thank you for pointing out my mistakes. The no.1, I give briefer summary form of the entire story. And the no.2, is the long summary.

1. A policeman’s investigation in a murder tracks down an influential politician as a prime suspect. As he tries to serve justice, he has to bear the responsibility of bringing down a giant.
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Jenn1231. A policeman’s investigation in a murder tracks down an influential politician as a prime suspect.
1. A policeman’s investigation into a murder leads to an influential politician who is the prime suspect.

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