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Lucas21c Posted 17 years ago
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Would you check my setences out?
I think there might be some errors. Please correct them.
Thanks.
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He had been tortured and dead in that jail. However, his family couldn't know exactly what had happend there. It(=his death) was just treated as a unfortunate accident in the obituary - like a sample one.
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He had been tortured and dead in that jail. However, his family couldn't know exactly what had happend there. It(=his death) was just treated as a unfortunate accident in the obituary - like a sample one.
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It looks ok. Personally, I'd repfer to say "He died in jail as a result of being tortured. His family had no idea what happened.
- It looks ok.
- Personally, I'd repfer to say "He died in jail as a result of being tortured.
- His family had no idea what happened.
- The cause of his death was written of as an unfortunate accident by the authority.
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It looks ok. Personally, I'd repfer to say "He died in jail as a result of being tortured. His family had no idea what happened. The cause of his death was written of as an unfortunate accident by the authority.
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