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The issue involved here is the right to free speech on campus. Some racist group passed out racist leaflets on campus. Although campus police made them stop, they wrote protest letter to the President saying that their right to free speech was violated. The President says that university cannot tolerate hate language. The woman says that this problem is difficult. Although we have the right to free speech, we cannot say fire in crowded theater, and we cannot use racist and sexist comment in class discussion. The man also says that it is difficult to draw the line.
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The issue involved here is the right to free speech on campus. Some racist group passed out racist leaflets on campus. Although campus police made them stop, they wrote protest letter to the President saying that their right to free speech was violated. The President says that university cannot tolerate hate language. The woman says that this problem is difficult. Although we have the right to free speech, we cannot say fire in crowded theater, and we cannot use racist and sexist comment in class discussion. The man also says that it is difficult to draw the line.
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Hi you mainly have a problem with articles - a/an/the as these are nearly all missing. There are a couple of other errors. I've highlighted the parts you need to re-consider.
- Hi you mainly have a problem with articles - a/an/the as these are nearly all missing.
- There are a couple of other errors.
- I've highlighted the parts you need to re-consider.
- You also need to re-write 'the woman' and 'the man' as we don't know who you are talking about.
- The issue involved here is the right to free speech on campus.
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you mainly have a problem with articles - a/an/the as these are nearly all missing. There are a couple of other errors. I've highlighted the parts you need to re-consider. You also need to re-write 'the woman' and 'the man' as we don't know who you are talking about.
The issue involved here is the right to free speech on campus. Some racist group passed out racist leaflets on
you mainly have a problem with articles - a/an/the as these are nearly all missing. There are a couple of other errors. I've highlighted the parts you need to re-consider. You also need to re-write 'the woman' and 'the man' as we don't know who you are talking about.
The issue involved here is the right to free speech on campus. Some racist group passed out racist leaflets on
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