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Nik Posted 17 years ago
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Some colleges require that all freshmen take a world history course for one or two semesters. Other colleges have no such requirement, because world history usually taught in high school. Which type of curriculum do you think is better for freshmen and why? Include specific examples and details in your response.





I support the opinion that colleges have no such requirement. The reason is that university is the place where the students learn each major deeply. For example, the freshmen surely need to learn basic subject for the first time, but world history is not always related to other majors. I think that if students learn in freshmen year, they should learn basic range in their majors. Thus, I believe that college should consider deep study of majors.

  

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Highlighted a few things that need fixing. I support the opinion that (The question asks for your opinion. YOu are not asked to support someone else's opinion) colleges have no such requirement.

  • Highlighted a few things that need fixing.
  • I support the opinion that (The question asks for your opinion.
  • YOu are not asked to support someone else's opinion) colleges have no such requirement.
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  • For example, the freshmen surely need to learn basic subject for the first time, but world history is not always related to other majors.
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Highlighted a few things that need fixing.


I support the opinion that (The question asks for your opinion. YOu are not asked to support someone else's opinion) colleges have no such requirement. The reason is that university is the place where the students learn each major deeply (Do you mean "deepen their understanding about a particular area of study?). For example, the freshmen

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