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The most dangerous thing I ever did was rock-climbing. When I was asked if I wanted to do or not by my friend, I told him it was impossible for me. I was reluctant to decide to rock-climb. For the first time, it was easier for me to climb, because I was still climbing low point of the rock; I could not feel scared, looking down. However, as I went up as high as I could not look down for fear, I could not move any more, shuddering for height. As a result, I gave up climbing and went down. I learned to refuse what I do not want to do from this experience.

  

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The most dangerous thing I ever did was rock-climbing. When I was asked by my friend if I wanted to do it again or not by my friend , I told him it was impossible for me. I was reluctant to do it.

  • The most dangerous thing I ever did was rock-climbing.
  • When I was asked by my friend if I wanted to do it again or not by my friend , I told him it was impossible for me.
  • I was reluctant to do it.
  • decide to rock-climb .
  • For the first time, it was easier for me to climb, because I was still climbing ( meaning unclear) low point of the rock; I could not feel scared, even when I looked down.
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The most dangerous thing I ever did was rock-climbing. When I was asked by my friend if I wanted to do it again or not by my friend, I told him it was impossible for me. I was reluctant to do it. decide to rock-climb. For the first time, it was easier for me to climb, because I was still climbing (meaning unclear) low point of the rock; I could n

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