0
Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Would you check my English? ( Nov.7)
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: I'll have strawberry ice cream for dessert.
F: You'd better not. Don't you realize how much sugar ( there are ) in it?
M: But it has real strawberry ( there's real strawberry in it). It says so on the package.
F: Sugar is one of the worst things if you are [ want ] to lose your weight.
No. 2
M: I don't think it will [ is going to ] rain this evening.
F: Why not? [ Why do you think so? ] Don't you see the black clouds in the sky?
M: Of course, yes. But we can see the blue sky in the west.
It means it'll be fine.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: I'll have strawberry ice cream for dessert.
F: You'd better not. Don't you realize how much sugar ( there are ) in it?
M: But it has real strawberry ( there's real strawberry in it). It says so on the package.
F: Sugar is one of the worst things if you are [ want ] to lose your weight.
No. 2
M: I don't think it will [ is going to ] rain this evening.
F: Why not? [ Why do you think so? ] Don't you see the black clouds in the sky?
M: Of course, yes. But we can see the blue sky in the west.
It means it'll be fine.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hi No. 1 M: I'll have strawberry ice cream for dessert. F: You'd better not.
- Hi No.
- 1 M: I'll have strawberry ice cream for dessert.
- F: You'd better not.
- Don't you realize how much sugar ( there are ) (there) is in it?
- M: But it has real strawberry strawberries (in it) ( there's real strawberry in it).
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
2 Answers
0
Hi
No. 1
M: I'll have strawberry ice cream for dessert.
F: You'd better not. Don't you realize how much sugar( there are ) (there) is in it?
M: But it has realstrawberry strawberries (in it)( there's
No. 1
M: I'll have strawberry ice cream for dessert.
F: You'd better not. Don't you realize how much sugar
M: But it has real
00
Related Questions