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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Would you check my English? (Jan.22)

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?

No. 1

M: I'm here to install your new computer. Where shall I [ would you like me to ] hook it up?

F: In place of that last computer on my desk, please.

M: OK. I'll bring out of the truck.

No. 2

M: Well, I have to be going [ leaving ] now. Will you get me my jacket?
[ must ]

F: Certainly, but I have no idea which [ one ] is yours. ( Q Is "one" necesarry? )

M: The checked one over there is mine.

Thank you!
  

Top answer

Hi, Kenta. Kenta Hello. I wrote two dialogues.

— Fandorin

  • Hi, Kenta.
  • Kenta Hello.
  • I wrote two dialogues.
  • Would you check them?
  • No.
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Hi, Kenta.
KentaHello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?

No. 1

M: I'm here to install your new computer. Where shall I [ would you like me to ] hook it up?As for me, both suit well.

F: At the place of that last computer on my desk where the previous was, on my desk (where my last computer was, on my d
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Hi,
I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?

Here's another try.
As a general comment, there are almost always cultural considerations involved in making such dialogues truly natural.For example, if a guy delivers things with a truck, he would just take his coat off and put it close by. Your #2 dialogue sounds like something that would take place with a guest at a dinner part
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Thank you. You helped me a lot! I'm going to study English forever, so please help me!

kenta
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