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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Would you check my English? (Feb.11)
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?
No. 1
M: I'd like to send this parcel by registered mail.
F: Sure. Do you want to take out insurance on it?
M: Yes, that sounds good. How about $300 worth?
F: OK. Please fill in this form.
No. 2
M: Now I'm trying to decide my [ the ] summer vacation plan [ schedule ] ?
F: I can't take my time off this summer. My baby is expected in September,
so I'll have to take days off then.
M: Oh, congratulations!
Thank you! kenta
No. 1
M: I'd like to send this parcel by registered mail.
F: Sure. Do you want to take out insurance on it?
M: Yes, that sounds good. How about $300 worth?
F: OK. Please fill in this form.
No. 2
M: Now I'm trying to decide my [ the ] summer vacation plan [ schedule ] ?
F: I can't take my time off this summer. My baby is expected in September,
so I'll have to take days off then.
M: Oh, congratulations!
Thank you! kenta
Top answer
I think it's okay. " (Also possible) I'm trying to decide how to plan my summer vacation schedule.
- I think it's okay.
- " (Also possible) I'm trying to decide how to plan my summer vacation schedule.
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I think it's okay.
I'd probably say, "so I'll have to save my time off for then."
Without further context, I'd probably skip the "Now."
(Also possible) I'm trying to decide how to plan my summer vacation schedule.
I'd probably say, "so I'll have to save my time off for then."
Without further context, I'd probably skip the "Now."
(Also possible) I'm trying to decide how to plan my summer vacation schedule.
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