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Kenta Posted 18 years ago
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Would you check my English?

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: I'd like to send these CDs to Tokyo, Japan. How long will it take?

F: If we send them by special express, it will take 2-3 days. Seamail

will take 6-8 weeks. I recommend air mail. It will take about a

week.

M: Okay. I'll use it then.

No. 2

M: Why didn't you come to yesterday's meeting?

F: What are you talking [saying] about? It is (on) June 16th, isn't it?

M: No, it was (on) June 14th.

F: Oh, good lord!

Thank you!
  

Top answer

Hi, I'll make these seem natural. No. 1 M: I'd like to send these to Tokyo, Japan, please.

  • Hi, I'll make these seem natural.
  • No.
  • 1 M: I'd like to send these to Tokyo, Japan, please.
  • How long will it take?
  • F: If you send them by special express, it'll take 2-3 days.
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Hi,
I'll make these seem natural.

No. 1

M: I'd like to send these to Tokyo, Japan, please. How long will it take?

F: If you send them by special express, it'll take 2-3 days. Seamail

takes 6-8 weeks. I recommend air mail. It'll take about a

week.

M: Okay, airmail, thank you.

No. 2

M: Why didn't you come to the mee
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Thank you, Cleve. So in what situation and by what kind of people is "Good lord!" used? Will you give me some examples? I though "Good lord!" is not so vulgar as "Oh my ***!", and even women can use this expression.
Is there any comment about this?
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Hi,

No. 2

M: Why didn't you come to the meeting yesterday?

F: What are you talking about? It's tomorrow, isn't it?

M: No, it was yesterday.

F: Oh, good lord! (expressions to express surprise vary quite a lot, due to factors such as age, level of education, personal inclination and the cul
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Thank you, Clive. You helped me a lot!

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