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Kenta Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Would you check my English?
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you check them?
No. 1
M: You look depressed, Jill. What's the matter?
F: It's my pet rabbit. I had to take him to the vet this morning and ...
M: Oh, really? I can't tell you how sorry I am.
No. 2 On the train
M: It seems that we are on the wrong train. We should have arrived
by now.
F: Why don't we get off at the next station?
M: OK. We'd better ask someone for directions.
Thank you!
No. 1
M: You look depressed, Jill. What's the matter?
F: It's my pet rabbit. I had to take him to the vet this morning and ...
M: Oh, really? I can't tell you how sorry I am.
No. 2 On the train
M: It seems that we are on the wrong train. We should have arrived
by now.
F: Why don't we get off at the next station?
M: OK. We'd better ask someone for directions.
Thank you!
Top answer
Hi Kenta, They look fine to me. Why, though, does M in dialogue 1 interrupt F just as she's telling him what happened to her pet rabbit?
- Hi Kenta, They look fine to me.
- Why, though, does M in dialogue 1 interrupt F just as she's telling him what happened to her pet rabbit?
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Hi Kenta,
They look fine to me.
Why, though, does M in dialogue 1 interrupt F just as she's telling him what happened to her pet rabbit?
They look fine to me.
Why, though, does M in dialogue 1 interrupt F just as she's telling him what happened to her pet rabbit?
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No. 1
M: You look depressed, Jill. What's the matter?
F: It's my pet rabbit. I had to take him to the vet this morning and ...
M: Oh, really? That's too bad. [original phrase too formal, too tragic]
No. 2 On the train
M: I think we're [original too formal] on the wrong train. We should've arrived
by now.
F:
No. 1
M: You look depressed, Jill. What's the matter?
F: It's my pet rabbit. I had to take him to the vet this morning and ...
M: Oh, really? That's too bad. [original phrase too formal, too tragic]
No. 2 On the train
M: I think we're [original too formal] on the wrong train. We should've arrived
by now.
F:
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My English sometimes sounds too formal, doesn't it? Thank you, Micawber!
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