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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Would you check for grammar and punctuation errors?
- Would you check for grammar and punctuation errors?
I thought of an idea for a beat story and wanted to get some feed back or approval. It would be interesting to see how people all over the enterprise connect with historic dental attributions. The Phoenicians were an ancient people of Canaan, which is located along the coastal regions of modern day Lebanon, Syria, and . The Phoenicians documented all of their attributions through Dental art. In 1862, Dr. Gaillardot, connected with Renan’s Syrian exploring expedition, found in the most ancient part of the necropolis of , a part of the upper jaw of a woman in which the six anterior teeth were united together with gold wire. The bridge of teeth was substitutions for lost teeth. This bridge in place of lost teeth would be the first discovery leading to the invention we know today as dentures. Thank youJ
I thought of an idea for a beat story and wanted to get some feed back or approval. It would be interesting to see how people all over the enterprise connect with historic dental attributions. The Phoenicians were an ancient people of Canaan, which is located along the coastal regions of modern day Lebanon, Syria, and . The Phoenicians documented all of their attributions through Dental art. In 1862, Dr. Gaillardot, connected with Renan’s Syrian exploring expedition, found in the most ancient part of the necropolis of , a part of the upper jaw of a woman in which the six anterior teeth were united together with gold wire. The bridge of teeth was substitutions for lost teeth. This bridge in place of lost teeth would be the first discovery leading to the invention we know today as dentures. Thank youJ
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Hi, - Would you check for grammar and punctuation errors? Just some small edits as shown. You didn't ask about meaning or style, but parts of this I don't understand and parts of it seem awkward.
- Hi, - Would you check for grammar and punctuation errors?
- Just some small edits as shown.
- You didn't ask about meaning or style, but parts of this I don't understand and parts of it seem awkward.
- I thought of an idea for a beat story and wanted to get some feedback or approval.
- It would be interesting to see how people all over the enterprise connect with historic dental attributions.
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Hi,
- Would you check for grammar and punctuation errors? Just some small edits as shown.
You didn't ask about meaning or style, but parts of this I don't understand and parts of it seem awkward.
I thought of an idea for a beat story and wanted to get some feedback or approval. It would be interesting to see how people all over the enterprise connect with hist
- Would you check for grammar and punctuation errors? Just some small edits as shown.
You didn't ask about meaning or style, but parts of this I don't understand and parts of it seem awkward.
I thought of an idea for a beat story and wanted to get some feedback or approval. It would be interesting to see how people all over the enterprise connect with hist
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