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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Would you change this sentence?
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Would you change something in this sentence?
Moreover, in Estonia Jane was applied to enrol in a kindergarten; in Germany, one must pay for the kindergarten and I couldn’t afford that; furthermore, Bil considered that the child must stay at home and I must look after her, and not send to a kindergarten.
Thank you!
Would you change something in this sentence?
Moreover, in Estonia Jane was applied to enrol in a kindergarten; in Germany, one must pay for the kindergarten and I couldn’t afford that; furthermore, Bil considered that the child must stay at home and I must look after her, and not send to a kindergarten.
Thank you!
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Your text is incoherent. Please rewrite it in clear and distinct sentences.
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- Please rewrite it in clear and distinct sentences.
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Your text is incoherent. Please rewrite it in clear and distinct sentences.
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A simple answer is “Yes, I would.” In Canada, kindergarten is a pre-school level for young children. We do not use “a kindergarten”.
However, understanding this portion of a debate, I would need to know the portion that precedes “Moreover…”
Meanwhile, “in Estonia, Jane (omit was) applied to enrol in (omit a) kindergarten. In Germany, one must pay for kindergarten and I couldn’t aff
However, understanding this portion of a debate, I would need to know the portion that precedes “Moreover…”
Meanwhile, “in Estonia, Jane (omit was) applied to enrol in (omit a) kindergarten. In Germany, one must pay for kindergarten and I couldn’t aff
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