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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Would you change anything here?

Hi!

Would you change anything here?

Use this offer, and financial difficulties will no longer cause every-day problems in your fast track towards your goals.

Thank you!
  

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Take up this offe r a nd financial difficulties will no longer cause daily problems in your fast track towards your goals . As revised, it is correct, but the underlined part is a rather silly addition.

  • Take up this offe r a nd financial difficulties will no longer cause daily problems in your fast track towards your goals .
  • As revised, it is correct, but the underlined part is a rather silly addition.
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Take up this offer and financial difficulties will no longer cause daily problems in your fast track towards your goals.

As revised, it is correct, but the underlined part is a rather silly addition.
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Thans! I will try to do something with the underlined part Emotion: smile

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