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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
Grammar
Would you change anything about this?
Out in the library, the girl could be seen hiding, lying motionless on top of a bookcase, pressed against the ceiling.
Would you change anything about this?
Thank you in advance.
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There are two somewhat contradictory combinations — "out in" and "seen hiding" — but I think the larger context may make them seem less contradictory, so you probably don't need to change anything. CJ
- There are two somewhat contradictory combinations — "out in" and "seen hiding" — but I think the larger context may make them seem less contradictory, so you probably don't need to change anything.
- CJ
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There are two somewhat contradictory combinations — "out in" and "seen hiding" — but I think the larger context may make them seem less contradictory, so you probably don't need to change anything.
CJ
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