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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Would you be able to check whether the sentence below is grammatically and structurally correct?
Hi everyone,
Please would anyone be able to check whether my sentence below is grammatically and structurally correct? Will really appreciate your help and time.
''Dear Mr XX,
I am writing to show my interest in entering agreement with yourself in hoping to appoint myself as an exclusive distributor in Christchurch. It would offer a great opportunity for your company to move inventory faster. If you are interested in taking this on, please contact me at _____ to explore this further. Thank you.''
Many thanks everyone!
Please would anyone be able to check whether my sentence below is grammatically and structurally correct? Will really appreciate your help and time.
''Dear Mr XX,
I am writing to show my interest in entering agreement with yourself in hoping to appoint myself as an exclusive distributor in Christchurch. It would offer a great opportunity for your company to move inventory faster. If you are interested in taking this on, please contact me at _____ to explore this further. Thank you.''
Many thanks everyone!
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Dear Mr XX, I am writing to express my interest in becoming your exclusive distributor in Christchurch. It would offer a great opportunity for your company to move inventory faster and expand your New Zealand sales with someone who knows this market well. If you are interested in pursuing this possibility , please contact me at __ .
- Dear Mr XX, I am writing to express my interest in becoming your exclusive distributor in Christchurch.
- It would offer a great opportunity for your company to move inventory faster and expand your New Zealand sales with someone who knows this market well.
- If you are interested in pursuing this possibility , please contact me at __ .
- I would be eager to answer any questions and concerns, and explore this further.
- Thank you.
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Dear Mr XX,
I am writing to express my interest in becoming your exclusive distributor in Christchurch. It would offer a great opportunity for your company to move inventory faster and expand your New Zealand sales with someone who knows this market well. If you are interested in pursuing this possibility, please contact me at __ . I would be eager
I am writing to express my interest in becoming your exclusive distributor in Christchurch. It would offer a great opportunity for your company to move inventory faster and expand your New Zealand sales with someone who knows this market well. If you are interested in pursuing this possibility, please contact me at __ . I would be eager
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