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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Would you all be able to proof read the statement below for me?
Hello all English teachers,
Would you all be able to proof read the statement below for me? Thank you very much in advance.
We are very proud to be partner with Mr Ken, a Japanese famous photographer, to distribute his camera in Iceland.
Mr Ken is a well known professional photographer for his ability to shoot anything his clients want , hence being call a multishooting photographer in Japan. He is famous as a film camera lover who is skillful in camera restoration particular in Ricoh Auto Half. Because of this passion, he published two books to share his immense knowledge of these cameres and being interview by NHK TV in 2010. The best is , some of the photos in his book is taken in Iceland !!!! . Mr Ken has told me personally that he likes Iceland a lot.
Mr Ken started working at Yashica after he graduateed from Tokyo Photography College in 1967, and moved on to Magazinehouse Co Ltd. as fashion photographer on 1969 until 2003. Mr Ken has also been involved in photographing many famous actresses such as Anita Briem.
Mr Ken is also famous with his DIGITAL Ricoh Auto Half. Yes, you didn't get me wrong, it's a DIGITAL which was handmade by Mr Ken . These cameras are made by Mr Ken himself. The camera is a vintage body from 1960 and embedded with a Digital body. All these cameras come in very nice color and all are made by Mr Ken himself.
Would you all be able to proof read the statement below for me? Thank you very much in advance.
We are very proud to be partner with Mr Ken, a Japanese famous photographer, to distribute his camera in Iceland.
Mr Ken is a well known professional photographer for his ability to shoot anything his clients want , hence being call a multishooting photographer in Japan. He is famous as a film camera lover who is skillful in camera restoration particular in Ricoh Auto Half. Because of this passion, he published two books to share his immense knowledge of these cameres and being interview by NHK TV in 2010. The best is , some of the photos in his book is taken in Iceland !!!! . Mr Ken has told me personally that he likes Iceland a lot.
Mr Ken started working at Yashica after he graduateed from Tokyo Photography College in 1967, and moved on to Magazinehouse Co Ltd. as fashion photographer on 1969 until 2003. Mr Ken has also been involved in photographing many famous actresses such as Anita Briem.
Mr Ken is also famous with his DIGITAL Ricoh Auto Half. Yes, you didn't get me wrong, it's a DIGITAL which was handmade by Mr Ken . These cameras are made by Mr Ken himself. The camera is a vintage body from 1960 and embedded with a Digital body. All these cameras come in very nice color and all are made by Mr Ken himself.
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Please delete the words highlighted in yellow. Anonymous We are very proud to be partner with Mr . Ken, a Japanese famous photographer, to distribute his camera in Iceland.
- Please delete the words highlighted in yellow.
- Anonymous We are very proud to be partner with Mr .
- Ken, a Japanese famous photographer, to distribute his camera in Iceland.
- Mr .
- Ken is a well - known as a professional photographer for his multi-shooting (the ability to shoot anything his clients want).
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Please delete the words highlighted in yellow.
AnonymousWe are very proud to be partner with Mr. Ken, a Japanese famous photographer, to distribute his camera in Iceland.
Mr. Ken is
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Hi Chalk, many thanks for proofreading for me. Your time and help are very much appreciated! The name above is just fictional. My apologies for the confusion.
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That's fine. I am a bit of a photographer so it was interesting to hear about this type of camera. When I looked into it more, I saw the other name.
By the way, remember, when you are using Mr. there's a period after it.
Chalk
By the way, remember, when you are using Mr. there's a period after it.
Chalk
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chalkbrd By the way, remember, when you are using Mr. there's a period after it. ChalkSure Chalk. Many thanks again.
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