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Chnwq Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
would u help me to correct my reflective journal?
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00 In the first ALS class, after the test of note-taking, teacher donot given the answer but ask us to discuss about the note questions. She told me I can discuss with my friends by a group. We gather round and started. I talked about my opinion to the other, heard about their answer carefully. when I heard my friend allen have a different answer, I move my seat to near him and argue with him. After the 15 minutes' group discussion, although there are also some questions uncertain ,I felt I deeply understand the article and questions. I have never experienced this type of study in class. 02 br
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00 In china, when I have class, I sit on the fixed seat and what I need to do is just listen to the teacher. We will be given exactly right answer of all questions by teacher. If I have uncertain answer or own opinion about the course, I ask for my teacher after the class. Never to do group discussion in class even it may be seen as break rules. I simply believe the study is just get the final answer. 02 br
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00 But now I have a totally new studystyle in class. I can share my classmates' opinions and debate on the argumentative question with other,this is encouraged in the class. In the group discussion, I donot have the correct answers first, I have to thinking deeply of the question because many other students may have different opinions with me. In my opinion, I really participate in the study and I got the great impression of this. I learned more than the answer.This is an really effective way of study. 02 br
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00 Now I have started thinking about the study. The academic is very series,to ask teacher directly, we can got a very correct answer, but this is not study..To disscuss with others may not get the correct answer first but I could get more information from different perspectives. I want to know the other's opinion, and the others also want to know my idea. It may looks not series but it is true study .In the future study, what I concern are not only to get the final answer, but also to know more different perspectives of the course. 02 br
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00 In the first ALS class, after the test of note-taking, teacher donot given the answer but ask us to discuss about the note questions. She told me I can discuss with my friends by a group. We gather round and started. I talked about my opinion to the other, heard about their answer carefully. when I heard my friend allen have a different answer, I move my seat to near him and argue with him. After the 15 minutes' group discussion, although there are also some questions uncertain ,I felt I deeply understand the article and questions. I have never experienced this type of study in class. 02 br
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00 In china, when I have class, I sit on the fixed seat and what I need to do is just listen to the teacher. We will be given exactly right answer of all questions by teacher. If I have uncertain answer or own opinion about the course, I ask for my teacher after the class. Never to do group discussion in class even it may be seen as break rules. I simply believe the study is just get the final answer. 02 br
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00 But now I have a totally new studystyle in class. I can share my classmates' opinions and debate on the argumentative question with other,this is encouraged in the class. In the group discussion, I donot have the correct answers first, I have to thinking deeply of the question because many other students may have different opinions with me. In my opinion, I really participate in the study and I got the great impression of this. I learned more than the answer.This is an really effective way of study. 02 br
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00 Now I have started thinking about the study. The academic is very series,to ask teacher directly, we can got a very correct answer, but this is not study..To disscuss with others may not get the correct answer first but I could get more information from different perspectives. I want to know the other's opinion, and the others also want to know my idea. It may looks not series but it is true study .In the future study, what I concern are not only to get the final answer, but also to know more different perspectives of the course. 02 br
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Top answer
0 Helloo, I've corrected the first paragraph for you to show you what sort of mistakes you are making, and highlighted them in the second. 02 br 02 br 00 In the first ALS class, after the note-taking test, the teacher didn't give us the answers but asked us to discuss the questions. She told me I could talk with my friends in a group.
- 0 Helloo, I've corrected the first paragraph for you to show you what sort of mistakes you are making, and highlighted them in the second.
- 02 br 02 br 00 In the first ALS class, after the note-taking test, the teacher didn't give us the answers but asked us to discuss the questions.
- She told me I could talk with my friends in a group.
- We gathered round and started.
- Wwhen I heard my friend, Allen, had a different answer to mine, I moved my seat near him and argued with him.
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0 Helloo, I've corrected the first paragraph for you to show you what sort of mistakes you are making, and highlighted them in the second. I'll let you work through the final two as I suspect this is a course assignment. 02 br
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00 In the first ALS class, after the note-taking test, the teacher didn't give us the answers but asked us to discuss the questions. She told me I cou
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00 In the first ALS class, after the note-taking test, the teacher didn't give us the answers but asked us to discuss the questions. She told me I cou
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00 But I will never post my assignment to the internet. I think it is cheating, not honest. 02 br
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00 But I want to discuss the use of words or sentences with other. 0250href /English/WrittenEaasyGrammarWordsMistakes/vhwmd/Post.htmc Thanks
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00 But I will never post my assignment to the internet. I think it is cheating, not honest. 02 br
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00 But I want to discuss the use of words or sentences with other. 0250href /English/WrittenEaasyGrammarWordsMistakes/vhwmd/Post.htmc Thanks
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0 Hi Chnwq, 02 br
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00 I understand and appreciate your ethical concerns. 02 br
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00 However, I hope that you will feel free to ask us any specific questions that you may have. That seems like a reasonable thing to do, in the same way that you would like to ask your teacher in person. 05 0 02 br
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00 Best wishes, Clive 010id 1
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00 I understand and appreciate your ethical concerns. 02 br
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00 However, I hope that you will feel free to ask us any specific questions that you may have. That seems like a reasonable thing to do, in the same way that you would like to ask your teacher in person. 05 0 02 br
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00 Best wishes, Clive 010id 1
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0 Thank you, Clive : ) 02 br
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00 I think I will ask you some questions about words, sentences and grammer... It is honest, isn't it? 02 br
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00 But the whole essay should finished by myself. 02 br
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00 Godd luck to me, to everyone. 0-
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00 I think I will ask you some questions about words, sentences and grammer... It is honest, isn't it? 02 br
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00 But the whole essay should finished by myself. 02 br
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00 Godd luck to me, to everyone. 0-
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