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Young people in Australia are bombarded with images of what is considered to be the most desirable. Media exposure creates an ideal body image that is nearly impossible for most teens to attain, resulting in dissatisfaction with their bodies and an unhealthy lifestyle. About 95% of sufferers ruthlessly harm their bodies in order to achieve this "perfect" body; however many do not realise that this continuous act is leading them into an unwelcoming menace. That is why this documentary, "Stay True, Stay You" is needed because many teenagers still do not understand the risks that they are putting to their health and how effective it can be in the long term. To get this point across, this documentary will incorporate several elements and features.