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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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WOULD SOMEONE REVIEW THIS FIRST PART OF MY MOTIVATION LETTER, PLEASE!
Dear Madam or Sir,
I m writing to apply for the Master s Degree in International Trade and Business Law at your university.
First of all, I would like to present myself. I hold a five year bachelor s degree in law, ranked first from my class, from the Peruvian University of Applied Sciences (UPC in Spanish) and I m a laywer since October 23 rd of 2006 with a cum laude. I consider myself capable thinker clear with creativity and a motivated active learner. Also, I am confident that the languistic, educational and cultural profil I have acquired combined with my knowledge in business law will be an important asset for my realization in the field of international business law.
I would like to share my interest in international business law in order to related it with the master I m applying for. I choose to study law at my university because of their courses focussed on Law and Economics, Trade and Business showing me that law and management can be practice at the same time. After studying at my law school I was sure that business law is the field I will practice with all my dedication and disicipline.
I m writing to apply for the Master s Degree in International Trade and Business Law at your university.
First of all, I would like to present myself. I hold a five year bachelor s degree in law, ranked first from my class, from the Peruvian University of Applied Sciences (UPC in Spanish) and I m a laywer since October 23 rd of 2006 with a cum laude. I consider myself capable thinker clear with creativity and a motivated active learner. Also, I am confident that the languistic, educational and cultural profil I have acquired combined with my knowledge in business law will be an important asset for my realization in the field of international business law.
I would like to share my interest in international business law in order to related it with the master I m applying for. I choose to study law at my university because of their courses focussed on Law and Economics, Trade and Business showing me that law and management can be practice at the same time. After studying at my law school I was sure that business law is the field I will practice with all my dedication and disicipline.
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I assume that we have a problem showing your apostrophes and they are coming out as spaces instead? and I m a laywer since October 23 rd of 2006 with a *** laude. - this is confusing.
- I assume that we have a problem showing your apostrophes and they are coming out as spaces instead?
- and I m a laywer since October 23 rd of 2006 with a *** laude.
- - this is confusing.
- Is this the date you graduated your law degree?
- Or are you saying you have practiced as a lawyer?
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I assume that we have a problem showing your apostrophes and they are coming out as spaces instead?
and I m a laywer since October 23 rd of 2006 with a *** laude. - this is confusing. Is this the date you graduated your law degree? Or are you saying you have practiced as a lawyer? A law degree does not make you a lawyer. I would say I graduated *** laude on 23 October 2006.
langu
and I m a laywer since October 23 rd of 2006 with a *** laude. - this is confusing. Is this the date you graduated your law degree? Or are you saying you have practiced as a lawyer? A law degree does not make you a lawyer. I would say I graduated *** laude on 23 October 2006.
langu
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