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MelonieG Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Would someone please tell me if this sentence flows well & grammatically correct

By identifying the function of the circled words, students will learn how to use them accurately in a sentence and, within the same process, learn some new words as well.

Do I need to include "learn" in the last sentence?
  

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Yes. You could omit 'within the same process'. It's an awkward phrase, and it doesn't seem to add any meaning to the sentence.

  • Yes.
  • You could omit 'within the same process'.
  • It's an awkward phrase, and it doesn't seem to add any meaning to the sentence.
  • 'As well' is enough.
  • Clive
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Yes.

You could omit 'within the same process'. It's an awkward phrase, and it doesn't seem to add any meaning to the sentence. 'As well' is enough.

Clive
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Thank you Clive! I don't like writing papers.

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