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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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Would somebody correct gramma of this letter?
I am writing in regards to my interest in your advertised Production Test Specialist position, job number GA7470201. Previously, I worked at DataPath Inc. as an Electrical/Mechanical Assembler Tech. As an assembler, I wired and installed electrical panel, and terminated cables for proper connection to use in a compact trailer-based earth terminal that delivers secure, robust communications at the battalion level for communications on the quick halt (COTQH). I am also familiar with 12Volt battery and battery relay. Furthermore, I used function generator, oscilloscope analyzer, and digital multi-meter regularly in the technology lab at our University. During my academic years, I have learned and experienced multi-tasks and knowledge of engineering concepts, practices, and procedures. With my experience and knowledge, I feel that I am highly qualified for the position.
I’ll be graduating from Southern Polytechnic State University with a bachelor degree in Electrical Engineering Technology. I am proficient in Assembly Language, VHDL, MatLab, MathCad, and LabView. I also have strong understanding in circuit analysis. I am an expert in multi-tasking, performing various electrical and mechanical duties.
I’ll be graduating from Southern Polytechnic State University with a bachelor degree in Electrical Engineering Technology. I am proficient in Assembly Language, VHDL, MatLab, MathCad, and LabView. I also have strong understanding in circuit analysis. I am an expert in multi-tasking, performing various electrical and mechanical duties.
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Hi, In Western countries and companies, this kind of thing is normally formatted as a resume , and sent with a covering letter that includes only highlights of your qualifications. In the country in which you are applying, are resumes the norm? If so, you should rewrite all this in standard resume format.
- Hi, In Western countries and companies, this kind of thing is normally formatted as a resume , and sent with a covering letter that includes only highlights of your qualifications.
- In the country in which you are applying, are resumes the norm?
- If so, you should rewrite all this in standard resume format.
- Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,
In Western countries and companies, this kind of thing is normally formatted as a resume, and sent with a covering letter that includes only highlights of your qualifications. In the country in which you are applying, are resumes the norm? If so, you should rewrite all this in standard resume format.
Best wishes, Clive
In Western countries and companies, this kind of thing is normally formatted as a resume, and sent with a covering letter that includes only highlights of your qualifications. In the country in which you are applying, are resumes the norm? If so, you should rewrite all this in standard resume format.
Best wishes, Clive
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Hi Clive,
You wrote this sentence.
If so, you should rewrite all this in standard resume format.
I was looking at your post and have been wondering what you didn't place an article in front of he words "standard resume format" and searching for the sentences with that phrase. Then, I came up with the following sentence that have no article in front.
You wrote this sentence.
If so, you should rewrite all this in standard resume format.
I was looking at your post and have been wondering what you didn't place an article in front of he words "standard resume format" and searching for the sentences with that phrase. Then, I came up with the following sentence that have no article in front.
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Hello Clive:
I'm trying to write this as a cover letter. I would love it to be a cover letter. I don't know how to fix it for it to be more readable and understandable.
Thank you for your help Clive.
Nhan
I'm trying to write this as a cover letter. I would love it to be a cover letter. I don't know how to fix it for it to be more readable and understandable.
Thank you for your help Clive.
Nhan
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Hi Believer,
Then, it led me to wonder why all the following sentences following the words "a change of" don't seem to follow the "article" rule. Why are there no articles?
A change of (a ????) manager would certainly be the the club's interest.
a change of (a ?????) job
Then, it led me to wonder why all the following sentences following the words "a change of" don't seem to follow the "article" rule. Why are there no articles?
A change of (a ????) manager would certainly be the the club's interest.
a change of (a ?????) job
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Hi Nandinh,
A cover letter is called a 'cover' letter because it accompanies (ie 'covers') a resume that is sent with it in the same envelope. The cover letter just mention a few highlights of your personal and professional qualifications for the job. A cover letter does not contain a lot of detail, in the way that your letter here does.
I really recommend that you should conside
A cover letter is called a 'cover' letter because it accompanies (ie 'covers') a resume that is sent with it in the same envelope. The cover letter just mention a few highlights of your personal and professional qualifications for the job. A cover letter does not contain a lot of detail, in the way that your letter here does.
I really recommend that you should conside
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Hi,
You're welcome. If you need information about resumes, or if you create one and want comments, please write again.
Best wishes, Clive
You're welcome. If you need information about resumes, or if you create one and want comments, please write again.
Best wishes, Clive
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Thank you, Clive.
Is it true then if there are adjectival phrases that qualify some nouns and act to describe the types of those nouns, the nouns within those adjectival phrases are not within the boundaries of article rules? Or is an adjectival phrase some kind of idiomatic phrase?
eg,]
Any change of domicile should be told to the higher-ups.
Is it true then if there are adjectival phrases that qualify some nouns and act to describe the types of those nouns, the nouns within those adjectival phrases are not within the boundaries of article rules? Or is an adjectival phrase some kind of idiomatic phrase?
eg,]
Any change of domicile should be told to the higher-ups.
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