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Nancy1982 Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

would please you help me say this in a shorter way& grammatically correct?

The mailing include the flyer to October reception will be sent out to all the businesses except the home based businesses and franchises.
  

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Hi, The mailing include the flyer to October reception will be sent out to all the businesses except the home based businesses and franchises. The mailing, including the flyer for the October reception, will be sent out to all businesses except home-based ones and franchises. best wishes, Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, The mailing include the flyer to October reception will be sent out to all the businesses except the home based businesses and franchises.
  • The mailing, including the flyer for the October reception, will be sent out to all businesses except home-based ones and franchises.
  • best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

The mailing include the flyer to October reception will be sent out to all the businesses except the home based businesses and franchises.

The mailing, including the flyer for the October reception, will be sent out to all businesses except home-based ones and franchises.

best wishes, Clive
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