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Nancy19820 Posted 20 years ago
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Would please help me say this in a better way and grammatically correct?

Thank you for replying to my request. However, my question was who I should contact for locating a AVC restaurant in ABC, DE. The city and citizens are interested in having AVC located here and wanted to know what we need do to do to have a AVC restaurant in City of ABC, DE. If we want to dine at AVC, we have to drive to DF; which is too far for us.
  

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I made a few changes - but your original letter is OK. Thank you for replying to my request. I would like to obtain the contact details of the best person to talk to about establishing a AVC restaurant in ABC, DE.

  • I made a few changes - but your original letter is OK.
  • Thank you for replying to my request.
  • I would like to obtain the contact details of the best person to talk to about establishing a AVC restaurant in ABC, DE.
  • The city and citizens are interested in having AVC located here; and we would like to know what we need do to make this happen .
  • At present, i f we want to dine at AVC, we have to drive to DF; which is too far for us.
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I made a few changes - but your original letter is OK.

Thank you for replying to my request. I would like to obtain the contact details of the best person to talk to about establishing a AVC restaurant in ABC, DE. The city and citizens are interested in having AVC located here; and we would like to know

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