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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Would correct my English, please? ( Nov 23 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: Now various robots are appearing and help us in our daily lives.

F: Sure. But new technology has both advantages and disadvantages.

M: Well, could you give me some example?

F: The car society is a good one.

No. 2

M: Where's you going?

F: To the library. I'll prepare for the exams.

M: You need to read some technical books?

F: No. My brothers are running around me at home.

M: No wonder.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

The corrections are attached as below No. 1 M: Now various robots are appearing and help us in our daily lives. ) F: Sure.

— Gus Teo

  • The corrections are attached as below No.
  • 1 M: Now various robots are appearing and help us in our daily lives.
  • ) F: Sure.
  • But new technology has both advantages and disadvantages.
  • (Yes it is indeed.
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The corrections are attached as below

No. 1

M: Now various robots are appearing and help us in our daily lives.

(Nowadays, there are various robots have appeared and helped us out in daily life.)

F: Sure. But new technology has both advantages and disadvantages.

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Hi, Gus Teo. You taught me natural English. You helped me a lot.

Thank you very much. kenta
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