Would computers replace a book or another written word in future?

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It is clear that nowadays Internet has a special role on finding out the articles , books and other information materials of not only local writers but also foreign authors which are unreachable for us. So, by using Internet we can free download or order them to our computers in a few minutes and read from the screen. In spite of Internet is full of information source and we can read whatever we want from monitor , from my point of view , it can not ever replace the book or other written materials because of some reasons.

Begin with, reading from computer screen is not the as to read books. Because during reading a book, for instance dramatic books, events taking place in the plot absorb you to itself so that you yourself as among the process and began imagine cadres of it in own brain. However, these feelings can not be heard from someone who have read the books from monitor. So, it is one of the essential factors of books which computers never can replace, that they made readers put themselves into place of characters by mentally.

Secondly, sitting for hours in front of the computers and reading something from screen is very harmful for healthy. Undoubtedly, that sedentary life and radiation of device will cause some diseases on human body in future, especially on eyesight. Likewise, watching to monitor for extended periods of time can make eye illnesses such as blurring , eye stain or etc.

Lastly, the other reason is that information which placed in information base is not always reliable. So, it can be changed by users, especially by hackers. In other word, nobody is responsible for fallacious information in the Internet. However, author of books always answer for he has written.

In summary, it can be said that reasons which mentioned above make books or other written materials irreplaceable. In addition, from my point of view, a pleasure of reading from books, especially in original, can not be replaced by reading from computers.