Would anyone, please, check my Motivational letter for mistakes?

Hey, this forum has already made my motivational letter writing a much easier task. I am really grateful for help, and I dare to ask for the last favour. Could someone, please, check this letter for mistakes and answer to the [questions in brackets]? Thank you very much and keep up the good work!!

Dear [who should I dedicate this to?]

I am writing to apply for undergraduate degree program in Marketing, Advertising & Public Relationsat University of Worcester. I want to gain deeper communicational practice and team-working skills in my path to become a worthy specialist, able to pursue my future career in a wide variety of subjects, but mostly – event organizing.

I have [I still haven't finished my gymnasium here, but I want to study there next year, and as far as I understand, I have to get my papers and write all the letters earlier than I will actually finish it. Should I write "I have just finished my gymnasium in there and there, blah blah", or "I am about to finish it blah blah", or is there any other magic way to solve this?] finished the “Sauletekis’s“ gymnasium in Šiauliai, Lithuania. When I was asked to decide what I wanted to do with my life, I undoubtedly chose the humanitarian path. The last few years of my active participation in theatre, music and community led me to understand how much influence the new multimedia technologies have on today’s society. I have achieved lots of experience in media-related grounds through taking active part in my school’s group “young journalists”. I got quite a taste of multimedia technologies: working with video and sound, and communicational experience: writing, speaking and editing. But that is only the half of what my future would consist of. The other half will be public relations. I have already been an active member of our gymnasium’s and city’s communities, organizing and leading various events, helping with taking care of the elderly, and even performing locally with our music band.

Despite the competitiveness of this popular industry, Marketing, Advertising & Public Relations is definitely the study course for me, because of my open-mindedness and adaptability. I always pleasantly listen to other people’s opinions and help them solve their problems. Being able to communicate with people with various opinions is a valuable feature in team-working. Also, being so busy made me learn how to arrange my activities so they fit into my schedule, so now I manage to carry on doing something different each day, which lets me learn more and more.

After I investigated the opportunities for me to study abroad, it was clear to me that I wanted to go to UK, because of the best conditions. I was immediately attracted by the statistics of growing numbers of international students, work opportunities and, most importantly, worldwide recognition. I chose to study in English, because I really like it and I don’t have any problem using it in everyday life.

All in all, I finally have a feeling that I am only one step away from turning my dreams into reality. I hope that this feeling will come true. If you need any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Thank you for considering my application and I look forward to your positive reply.

Yours faithfully,

Me