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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Would anyone please check my letter of motivation??

I am currently applying for the US-exchange program of my university. Would anyone be so kind to check my letter of motivation for me?
As I don't really want to post it on the internet I would like to send it to everyone who is willing to help me via e-mail.
The application deadline will be on Thursday. Please help me:-)
kind regards, Judith
  

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'' Well, it sounds a bit strange. What I am trying to say is that I will not only broaden my specialized knowledge abroad, but that I am particularly interested in the foreign educational system as I am becoming a teacher. '' Can u actually use IMPLY here?

— Anonymous

  • '' Well, it sounds a bit strange.
  • What I am trying to say is that I will not only broaden my specialized knowledge abroad, but that I am particularly interested in the foreign educational system as I am becoming a teacher.
  • '' Can u actually use IMPLY here?
  • '' It sounds really informal:-( I hope so is willing to help me!!
  • Judith
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There are also some specific questions I have:

'' By expanding my knowledge in my pursuit of becoming a teacher getting to.....''

Well, it sounds a bit strange. What I am trying to say is that I will not only broaden my specialized knowledge abroad, but that I am particularly interested in the foreign educational system as I am becoming a teacher.

and then:

''..
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I have typed my ideas for corrections to your draft in red. Hope that is O.K.

'' By expanding my knowledge in my pursuit of becoming a teacher getting to.....''

I am particularly interested in foreign education systems. I feel that studying overseas will greatly expand my knowledge and broaden my horizons.

Well,
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