Would anyone check this short writing please, it is urgent

My dream in paradise

There are people wearing white clothes, laughing with their families and children. They were exchanging hugs, and smiles as if they were over the moon. I got nearer to them asking about the reason of their great happiness. They treated me in a very nice way, considering me as their brother. ‘'No harm, no sadness from now on,'' they said. I asked them ‘'Why, we are still human beings and our nature is different from the angel's one.'' And all of a sudden, I was given a hug, oh it was my wife. She was the most beautiful woman I have ever met since she has changed to be like an angel without any faults. To illustrate, she had blue eyes, long hair, and a very soft white skin. Then, she invited me to see our own properties such as a great palace which was surrounded by ten sport cars. Inside it, there was a wide garden, provided by all the means of luxury. For example, a pool, and a small zoo. As we were going to further distance wondering around the palace, a young white boy called me to join him a certain place. My wife and I accepted his invitation to see an amazing forest, containing a large number of trees. The young boy got transformed into an angel with colorful wings to be like a peacock, showing off his beauty. Then, we jumped onto his back to have a tour among trees and waterfalls. It was really incredible to breathe the fresh air and some drops of water were splashing on our faces. On our flying, I fell off the angels back which caused me to wake from my bed and find myself in my real world.