Would anybody please correct my English?!!!!!!!

Hello! My name is Elena and I am from J

I really need your help with correcting my CV in English. I’ve lost my job because of the financial crisis L and I am trying to get a new job in the foreign company nowJ

I would appreciate your help!!!

Here is a bit from my CV:


CAREER OBJECTIVES

Long-term career plans: Professional growth in a world class company

Desired vacancy: Financial analyst

Work schedule: Full-time



SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS

Over six years of work experience in banking sector,

experience in sales and marketing,

managerial abilities,

leadership experience,

good negotiating skills,

presentation experience,

experience in accounting and reporting,

deep knowledge of lending procedures and further monitoring,

experience in managing the department’s operations on mortgage lending from scratch



WORK EXPERIENCE



1.

Commercial Bank “………” LLC

Affiliate Office in St.-Petersburg



Chief of Mortgage Lending Department/

Deputy Head of Retail Business Division



Main responsibilities:

- supervising the matters of private lending (mortgage, auto lending, consumer lending) in the affiliate;

- managing operations on lending;

- contributing to the growth of client base;

- negotiations with representatives of the appraisal, insurance and development companies accredited by the bank;

- presentations of the bank’s lending programs to real estate agencies and mortgage brokers;

- consulting the bank’s clients and partners on loan issue and loan support;

- control and analysis of the loan approval process and the credit transaction;

- continuous monitoring of retail market;

- preparation of reports



Head of Retail Business Department Mortgage Section



Main responsibilities:

- development of mortgage lending in the affiliate;

- managing sales activities via different channels;

- managing operations on mortgage lending;

- customer relationship management;

- developing relations with appraisal, insurance and development companies



2.

JSCB “………” OJCS

Affiliate Office in St.-Petersburg



Lending Department Chief Specialist (Front Office)



Main responsibilities:

- leading a team of loan managers (mortgage, consumer lending);

- managing operations on lending;

- review and analysis of materials justifying borrowing demand;

- preparation of materials on credit arrangements for the affiliate credit committee;

- credit transactions support;

- supervising the matters of advertising and promotion of the bank’s mortgage programs



Lending Department Leading Specialist (Back Office)



Main responsibilities:

- execution of credit agreements with retail and corporate customers;

- recording and control of credit and interest on credit repayments;

- control of credit agreements implementation;

- creation of reserves on bad debts in accordance with established procedure;

- preparation of internal reports and reports to the Head Office;

- processing and support of securities transactions



3.

OJSC “…………”

Affiliate Office “……”



Account Manager (Corporate Banking)

Main responsibilities:

- identifying and meeting VIP-customers’ needs;

- managing existing accounts;

- preparation of reports


Thanks in advance!!!