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Sb70012 Posted 11 years ago
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World's championships ....

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Would you please be kind enough to proof read the blue text to me? I have written it by myself
Thank you. Sorry if it's a bother

World's championships will be held in the June of the next year and I will be busy preparing Germany's team.
Germany's new year is coming, so if you are decisive to conduct your training classes and plan on developing 7 member soccer, then please make plans.
  

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The World Championships will be held in June of next year and I will be busy preparing Germany's team. The second sentence is difficult to understand. Try rewriting it in simpler and clearer language please.

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  • The World Championships will be held in June of next year and I will be busy preparing Germany's team.
  • The second sentence is difficult to understand.
  • Try rewriting it in simpler and clearer language please.
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The World Championships will be held in June of next year and I will be busy preparing Germany's team.

The second sentence is difficult to understand. Try rewriting it in simpler and clearer language please.
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Iran's new year is coming, so if you are decisive to conduct your training classes and plan on developing 7 member soccer, then please make plans.

Suppose that I am writing this letter to a coach.

Let me write [Iran]
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The Persian New Year is approaching, so if you've decided to conduct your training classes, and plan on forming 7-member soccer teams, then please go ahead and organize the necessary plans and schedules.

Please note that "decisive" is an adjective describing a personal quality. Compare it with such antonyms as "indecisive", "hesitant" or "reluctant".
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sb70012By 7 member soccer I mean that there are some soccers that each team has 7 players instead of 11 player.
"Soccer" in the US and Canada is football in the UK and the rest of the world http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/football
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Anonymous "Soccer" in the US and Canada is football in the UK and the rest of the world
As http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Association_football#Etymology_and_names from your second link says, the word 'soccer' is used, and is completely understood,
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fivejedjon Anonymous "Soccer" in the US and Canada is football in the UK and the rest of the world As this section from your second link says, the word 'soccer' is used, and is completely understood, in the UK and the rest of the world, even if 'football' is the first choice for the majority outside North America.
In other words, Americans and Canadians normal
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