Dear Forum Guru,
Please could you be so kind and correct essay below.
Hunger in the world
The persistence of hunger in a world of plenty is immoral. In today’s world it is a problem that should be solved very easily, but unfortunately there are still hungry people in the world. So, why is that there is every seventh children-man faced to eat thrown food to stay alive? While we, “First and Second World countries “, produce enough food for world’s population and afterwards throw and destroy tons of it.
World hunger has been a constant problem through the ages. In a world population with 7 billion people, more than 1 billion are desperately poor and forced to eat mud and food from a street. The cause of world hunger might seem to be quite obvious, because the concept of hunger is simple; being hungry means a lack of food, so world hunger must be caused either by a lack of food or by overpopulation. But in reality, neither of these reasons prove to be the case. Research has shown that Earth is producing more than enough food for world population, so that means that world hunger stems not from a lack of food or overpopulation. For example, on September 28th,2018. earthquake and tsunami hit the Indonesian island Sulawesi and caused multi-million damage and destroying thousands of homes. Also, we are daily watching how people from Syria are trying to escape from their country because of war. As well, all we saw the videos and images of malnourished children in Africa.
Therefore, we can conclude that hunger is cause by many events, but also, we can conclude that if economic system is high that there will not be global problems with poverty and hunger, even in the case of tsunami.
When I think about my ideal solution I realize that every country should insurance three most important things for every citizen: education, medicine and employment. If someone is educated he will earn money for food, pay taxes and invest money in his life. By this chain way economy will grow and there will be less problem with hunger and poverty.
What is your oppinion about this essay if it is written by some 18 years old foreign high school student, what grade I will get in uk ?
The persistence of hunger in a world of plenty is immoral. In today’s worl d, it is a problem that can should can be solved very easily, but unfortunately there are still hungry people in the world. So, why is it that there is every seventh children-man faced to eat thrown food to stay alive?
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The persistence of hunger in a world of plenty is immoral. In today’s world, it is a problem that can should can be solved very easily, but unfortunately there are still hungry people in the world. So, why is it that there is every seventh ch