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Dj Bueno Posted 21 years ago
Working Wonders
As the birds fly in the sky
I'll give you two presents
Seagulls taught me how to choose
A sparkle from the sun
And a fabulous blue after the cruise.
During the splendid sunset
I'll hire smart jet
By using some colorful smokes
I'll draw huge hearts in a plate.
When the dark rules the night
Moonlight will be my guide
I'll quieten all the noises down
Since only for you nigtingales
Will be singing a ballad.
With the help of an inspring breeze
I'll take pictures of the calm seas
Later I'll smarten them up
In order to give you the the feeling of ease.
One day I'll make a wondrous bunch of flowers
Containing all kinds of fragrant roses
Magical beauties these are
That will bring you happiness.
( I wrote this poem to my English teacher, she said she really liked it
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I'll give you two presents
Seagulls taught me how to choose
A sparkle from the sun
And a fabulous blue after the cruise.
During the splendid sunset
I'll hire smart jet
By using some colorful smokes
I'll draw huge hearts in a plate.
When the dark rules the night
Moonlight will be my guide
I'll quieten all the noises down
Since only for you nigtingales
Will be singing a ballad.
With the help of an inspring breeze
I'll take pictures of the calm seas
Later I'll smarten them up
In order to give you the the feeling of ease.
One day I'll make a wondrous bunch of flowers
Containing all kinds of fragrant roses
Magical beauties these are
That will bring you happiness.
( I wrote this poem to my English teacher, she said she really liked it
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This is a good poem. Post more of your work for us.
- This is a good poem.
- Post more of your work for us.
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This is a good poem. I liked the first 3 stanzas.Frankly, the last 2 stanzas don't go well with them.Post more of your work for us.
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