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Coincidence Posted 14 years ago
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Work+article

Hello Emotion: smile
Could you tell me please if the sentences below are correct?
1. Work with teenagers can be hard.

2. The work at your school would constitute a great source of experience for me.  (I have already mentioned the post I would like to apply for).

3. The work with students was very challenging. (I have already explained what kind of work it was)

4. I adore working with students of various age and at all levels of advancement. What I adore the most is the/- work with primary school pupils.
(I think no article should be placed here...)

Thank you for your help!
I would really appreciate it.
Kind regards!
  

Top answer

1. Working with teenagers can be challenging. 2.

  • 1.
  • Working with teenagers can be challenging.
  • 2.
  • I wholeheartedly believe that the experience of working at your school would be beneficial both to me and to you.
  • 3.
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1. Working with teenagers can be challenging.

2. I wholeheartedly believe that the experience of working at your school would be beneficial both to me and to you.

3. Teaching teenagers was challenging, but this teaching experience was very beneficial to me.

4. I love teaching and will willingly teach students of all ages and levels of ability. However, I best love w
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Hi,

I find the word 'adore', and even the word 'love', overly emotional in a job application. I'd settle for 'I enjoy . . . . '.

Clive
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Thank you for all suggestions!

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