Work Experience Letter

Hey,
For school i have to get work experience for next year. I have to apply for work experience at places and i was just wondering if you could help me correct my letter.

THANKS!

Mr. John Smith

Head of HR
JWT Australia

Dear Sir

I am particularly interested in consumer behaviour and therefore I would like to apply for work experience with JWT between the 23rd and the 28th of June, 2010.

I have already done some study in psychology and I am very intereseted in advertising. I am creative and have a wide range of interests such as music, art, pyschology, film and media, which are all included in the type of work that you do.

I am very interested in the production of advertisements, from the initial idea to the finished product.

I listen to instructions, I am responsible and I am personable and well mannered.

I think it would be beneficial for me to do work experience with JWT as it appears to have a rewarding career path in an area in which I have a strong interest.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,

Jane Doe
(MOB)****-***-*** (AH)(**)****-****

thank you so much!