Work Experience form

I wrote this letter, but I dont know if it is good.



Could someone also proofread?







thanks











Dear Mr [someone],



I am writing to you to apply for a work experience place at SMEC Urban between the [date1 - date 2].



I am 15 years old, and I am in year 9 at Yarra Valley Grammar. My favorite subjects are Maths, Science and Multimedia and I enjoy designing and solving problems.



In the future, i would like to be a civil engineer or similar. I want to experience what it would be like to work in the industry. I believe that I will benefit greatly if I could work with SMEC Urban for the week.



I very much look forward to hearing from you.





Yours sincerely ,







[My Name]