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D_say Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Work Experience

Good day dear friends,

Could you please help me with correction in below experience letter. Can you please guide me the way to draft as I dont want to use "During this course/ tenure, we found ..."

Thank you

Dec 31, 2002.

TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN

Mr. ABC was employed as Client Service Executive in our organization from February 01, 2002 to December 31, 2003.

During this tenure we found Mr. ABC confident, professionally sound, hardworking and devoted staff. He is a conscious and well motivated individual with a good sense of sincerity, open to challenges and efficiently worked in team.

For M/s. UWV Pvt. Ltd.

K. John

Human Resource
  

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During his tenure, Mr. ABC proved himself to be a confident, professionally sound, hardworking, and devoted (employee/co-worker/company man)... How does this sound?

  • During his tenure, Mr.
  • ABC proved himself to be a confident, professionally sound, hardworking, and devoted (employee/co-worker/company man)...
  • How does this sound?
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During his tenure, Mr. ABC proved himself to be a confident, professionally sound, hardworking, and devoted (employee/co-worker/company man)...

How does this sound?
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Thank you holyduke,

Can't we replace "during this/his tenure/ course" with any other phrase ?
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For all the years Mr. ABC has worked for our company/organization, he has... (you have to restructure the whole sentence)

I have only seen a few reference letters, the standard format is to use tenure and course... Sorry I can't be of greater help.
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Mr. ABC was employed as a Client Service Executive in our organization from February 01, 2002 to December 31, 2003.

During his time with our company, we found Mr. ABC to be confident, professionally sound, hardworking and devoted
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Dear John,

Glad to see your reply, of course it helped.

Thank you so much.

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