Work details for company invoice

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Hi All, I need to write small work detail (IT related) for my client invoice as below. Can someone please check the content and correct it?

Designing, developing, integrating, resolving technical issues and consulting on <xyz> product and other related <abc company> products and services.

Thank you in advance.

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

Hello, wmdcf—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member.

wmdcfDesigning, developing, integrating, and resolving technical issues and consulting on < product > and other related < ABC > products and services.

That sounds OK as it stands (it is not a complete sentence, of course), but as a slogan it is a bit long and involved. I suggest that you simplify it.

Wmdcf · Answer

Thanks for the prompt reply.

I change the sentence as below with your suggestion.

Invoiced for designing, developing, integrating, and resolving technical issues and technical consulting on various <abc company> products/services.

Mister Micawber · Answer

wmdcfI change the sentence as below with your suggestion.

OLD: Designing, developing, integrating, and resolving technical issues and consulting on < product > and other related < ABC > products and services

NEW: Invoiced for designing, developing, integrating, and resolving technical issues and technical consulting on various < ABC > products/services.

In what way do you think you have simplified your text?

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