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wordy sentence about Terry
I am trying to express the following snetences more concisely. If you see any problems, can I have your comments?
He ran at a pace of nearly 40 km. per day and had run 5373 km. when he got to Thunder Bay, Ontario. Thunderbay is a small city in western Ontario.
--> He ran at 40 km per day for 5373 Km to Thunder Bay, a small city in Western Ontario. or
---> At 40 km per day, he travelled 5373 km to Thunder Bay, a samll city in Western Ontario.
He ran at a pace of nearly 40 km. per day and had run 5373 km. when he got to Thunder Bay, Ontario. Thunderbay is a small city in western Ontario.
--> He ran at 40 km per day for 5373 Km to Thunder Bay, a small city in Western Ontario. or
---> At 40 km per day, he travelled 5373 km to Thunder Bay, a samll city in Western Ontario.
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He ran nearly 40 km per day for the 5373 km to Thunder Bay, a small city in Western Ontario.
- He ran nearly 40 km per day for the 5373 km to Thunder Bay, a small city in Western Ontario.
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He ran nearly 40 km per day for the 5373 km to Thunder Bay, a small city in Western Ontario.
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