I have extracted the following text from a comic forum.
Story started good. With a pretty decent premise, that until the author decide to go for political drama. The thing is, the author understanding of politics was not very deep. It's very obvious he was not a college graduate with major in politic, but I at least expect him to do a good research about the subject. But he didn't, thus my squirming in seat every 2 chapters and saying, "wait, I don't think he know what that word means", or "no, that's not how that [political/economic idea] works".
1) I'd like to know whether "it is" is omitted before "that" in bold and "good" is omitted after "that" like the following. : Story started good. With a pretty decent premise, It is that good until the author decide to go for political drama. 2) I'd like to know whether I can use the words consisting of only one or more gerund phrases as in the underlined words.
Thank you in advance for your help.
Top answer
Much of the grammar, vocabulary and sentence structure in your extract is faulty. Abandon it.
— Mister Micawber
Much of the grammar, vocabulary and sentence structure in your extract is faulty.
Abandon it.
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