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Contiluo Posted 13 years ago
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words and deeds
Please help me correct the paragraph below. Thanks!
The teacher censored that many adults’ individual attitudes and behaviors recklessly reveal their prejudice or discrimination on the lower class. For example, some parents would often laugh at those lower classes who make money by drudging in front of their children, saying “If you don’t study hard now, you will be like those people who drudge to make money. There will be no future ahead of you.” Their words and deeds are not aware of classism.
The teacher censored that many adults’ individual attitudes and behaviors recklessly reveal their prejudice or discrimination on the lower class. For example, some parents would often laugh at those lower classes who make money by drudging in front of their children, saying “If you don’t study hard now, you will be like those people who drudge to make money. There will be no future ahead of you.” Their words and deeds are not aware of classism.
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Sorry, but this is all very unnatural. Here my version of what I think you mean. I've tried to change as little as possible.
- Sorry, but this is all very unnatural.
- Here my version of what I think you mean.
- I've tried to change as little as possible.
- The teacher said disapprovingly that the attitude and behavior of many adults carelessly reveals their prejudices and discrimination towards the lower class.
- ” These parents' words and deeds reveal a classist attitude that they are not even aware of.
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Sorry, but this is all very unnatural.
Here my version of what I think you mean. I've tried to change as little as possible.
The teacher said disapprovingly that the attitude and behavior of many adults carelessly reveals their prejudices and discrimination towards the lower class
Here my version of what I think you mean. I've tried to change as little as possible.
The teacher said disapprovingly that the attitude and behavior of many adults carelessly reveals their prejudices and discrimination towards the lower class
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