Is either of these paragraphs correct?
a) "Take notice of his back. It's hard to keep your back that straight when the horse lifts its front hooves."
b) "Note his back. It's hard to keep your back that straight when the horse lifts its front hooves."
(In case both are correct, which one sounds more natural?)
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Christine Christie Is either of these paragraphs correct? They are both correct. ) They are both rather literary-sounding.
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Christine ChristieIs either of these paragraphs correct?
They are both correct.
Christine Christie (In case both are correct, which one sounds more natural?)
They are both rather literary-sounding. By the way, I have to wonder whether you meant "rears" by "lifts its front hooves".
Christine ChristieIs either of these paragraphs correct?
Both are possible, but we usually say "Take note of ..." in that context.
Take note of his back. It's hard to ....
By the way, you may want to use the verb 'rear up' or just 'rear' — a special term for horses:
Take note of his back. It's hard to keep your back straight when